Life Of Their Own
The poem I had been dozing with, jumped clean out of the window, landed on the bald moon – a black smudge at the centre. It sneeredat my sleeping form:tonight I reinvent myself.No longer will I...
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Hahahaha... it's so much more fun to write when your peeved at this art - eh?. I was actually half way through looking for a piece I wrote yonks (< ages) ago which might help you with your previous...
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C, I find this confusing. Specifically the "I"s and "you"s. It sneeredat my sleeping form:tonight I reinvent myself.No longer will I reflectdistorted images for youto drown in – Narcissus-like.Pools...
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Some of the best arguments I have are with myself. signed my evil twin http://www.youtube.com/wa...1MJ72v1Y&feature=related
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Cannotbe, I am not sure I favor pointing that we are reading about the poem right off the start, but this is my first read. I like the idea of it sneering at your body asleep--inventive! But then,...
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'Hahahaha... it's so much more fun to write when your peeved at this art - eh?.' - true! jas thanks for reading! you have a charming way of getting at the bottom of things or rather the top! i have...
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thanks poetema for such a comprehensive read & spending so much time over it. As i see it it's the poem speaking to N - except for the last two stanzas when N takes over. & N is actually...
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhh the link!!! You sneaky you, Cannotbe!!! That is all the frame I need!!! About having arguments with myself--I always lose--someone has to win--SPIN! Let us do a collective poem some...
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don't know how I missed this, cannot I followed your link to read. wonderful much enjoyed R.
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CBP--- vision and execution, a great combination. a poem running away, escaping the poet who nightly teases, pokes and abuses. High diddle diddle,The Cat and the Fiddle,The Cow jump'd over the...
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Thanks for yet another interesing quote from Bernie, I found the internet link to it (Matthea Harvey), and the following paragraph beings like this: "But if it’s relatively easy to write passable...
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thanks psychoetry - surely more praise than i deserve! feels good though! thank you rose - i'm so glad you enjoyed! bernie thanks a ton for the very comprehnsive read, comments, suggestions & the...
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poetema - cannot thank you enough for your interest & the motivation that you provide - it is so immensly encouraging - it keeps me going! 'I would like to see an anthologist create a new chapter...
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I think what MO really means is that you should follow your poetic instincts instead of your heart. Well, I know I do *smirk* where ya been?
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Dear Cannotbe,Why not post the poem up by itself, a new thread? To your question:I would end it, with Would you define me? Or something akin to that, where you do not spell it out. Forget...
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